Duty of Care in Afterschool Programs: Legal Obligations Explored

Abstract

Abstract Title: Duty of Care in afterschool programs Abstract Peer-Review Worksheet Score each component based on your reading of the abstract. Write comments related to each item on the following page. Number your comments. Does the abstract use legal theory and support it using evidence? (20% on final) DISAGREE NEUTRAL STRONGLY AGREE 1 2 3 4 5 Is there a basic legal argument in the abstract? (20% on final) DISAGREE NEUTRAL STRONGLY AGREE 1 2 3 4 5 Does the abstract use appropriate case law with citations? (Should be relevant cases using APA/BlueBook citations (15% on final)) DISAGREE NEUTRAL STRONGLY AGREE 1 2 3 4 5 Is the abstract written well? (Grammar, proofreading, APA style/BlueBook style (legal citation format), etc.) (15% on final) DISAGREE NEUTRAL STRONGLY AGREE 1 2 3 4 5  Does the abstract have a clear argument informed by legal theory, cases, or statutes (Is there a legal argument/ lack of repetition of statements)? (15% on final) DISAGREE NEUTRAL STRONGLY AGREE 1 2 3 4 5 Is there a clear conclusions based on the information presented in the abstract? (10% on final) DISAGREE NEUTRAL STRONGLY AGREE 2 3 4 5 Is there a reference list? (5% on final) DISAGREE NEUTRAL STRONGLY AGREE 1 2 3 4 5 _____ Accept with revisions _____minor revisions ____ major revisions _____ rewrite Comments: I like the cases that were added into this abstract but feel like they were put in the wrong place. It should start with a strong opening paragraph and lead into that rather than start it all off with the cases. I also feel like the conclusion can have more to it. I would rewrite it and move everything around. Good job regardless.